Saturday, August 1, 2009




1 comment:

  1. like your journey line.

    nice.

    tidy up the typography and spacing around the little heads.

    too much spacing before the text start.

    although you want some.

    and, typography isn't working well together.

    when two letters round to the next line, you know you've got problems.

    try something more condensed.

    don't be extreme.

    g.

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